Early Islands of Hope Update – 22/03/2018

Another weekend away means another early update to ‘Islands of Hope.’ After the busy times of the last few weeks and the fact I am updating two days early, you might think this weeks update is only a few hundred words. Well no, it has been another week of flowing writing. In fact this section has been one of the easiest to write. It follows Kira’s mother on the first step of her mission. It is basically about building tension and showing that Johanna, like Kira, is trapped in a world she did not ask to be part of. I though I would only write about five hundred words of her entering the city, but other ideas jumped in and I have managed over double that. I am really happy with it, it may just be my favourite part of the story so for. Not because it is overly exciting but because I think it reads well, showing you how she feels rather than explaining everything in detail. Why not find out if you agree by heading to wattpad. You can read Chapter 17 here, or start from the beginning here.

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