TWOAK Chapter 3 now live
For anyone who is reading the novel I am currently writing the good news is that Chapter 3 of The Wings of Aysh-Karal is now live on wattpad. Take a look and tell me what you think. There has been a lot of description and setting up the plot so far but hold out as it is starting to get going. The action really starts in Chapter 4 and for only the second time in the book so far it is from the point of view of someone other than Martin Paulson.
Anyhows, the page for the whole book is here.
To jump straight to Chapter 3 click here.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated, please make it constructive as general abuse is not really helpful.